A haiku is an epigrammatic Japanese verse form of three short lines; usually with seasonal or verbal reference. Although some people love to write those long poems that are much more conventional than a 3 line verse, this type fascinates me more. Though short, it is more direct and still brings out the “wow” in everybody.
Anyway, here are some that I came up with. If you don’t like it, I’ll accept any constructive criticism. If you do like it, then, I say Domo arigato gozaimasu. Enjoy and stay blessed.
Autumn leaves changing
Welcoming the cold winter
Loneliness lingers
An amazing girl
I am longing to meet her
Destiny awaits
Looking through a lens
Memories are recorded
My eyes are amazed
Friday, October 2, 2009
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You are right about the wow factor John. These are amazing. People write different kinds of poetry because its what they prefer. Personally I don't write haiku because its just not my style. I don't have a particular style actually.If what I wrote expresses what I feel then I feel good about it. If other people like it then its a bonus. =)
ReplyDeletegood job kuya! loved your haiku!
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